Night walk

Calm was the night and clear was the
Sky
The beds of roses lay still their color red like the
Color on my cheeks
Alone you and I went
To hear the soft voices of the night
Whisper
I sat, you lay next to me
And just as our bliss we began with a kiss
But scarcely your breath you could draw
I knew it was your passion that
Caused your fears
With a touch of my hand, your fears
Faded
With modesty you compelled your desire
You laughed out loud, and with a bliss we began
With a kiss
And the wind whispering to our
Love

Author's Note

Trying to improve my writing hope I did better, hope you like it. Thank you

Reviews

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

Wow what a beautifully written piece. I really like the earie feeling of romance in the mood of the piece. This is such a solitary work of art. But it speaks words of truth. I sometimes get really nervous and hold back . Keep up the good work and I hope you continue to be inspired.