Life

Life

A Poem by Dead_End
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a short poem showing my biggest fear.. to die as Mr. Nobody!

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My life is like a gamble,
this thought makes me tremble!
today i am alive but in moment i can die!
but i am still gonna try
prove my worth,
certainly before my death!

© 2010 Dead_End


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short but reflects your outlook well... and to make a correction it should be "in a moment" in the third line...

Posted 14 Years Ago


it's short, but you still get your message out there. good job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


all most every one fears of dying as nobody! good write!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on January 23, 2010
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I am a 15yrs old guy.If you wanna know more than ask me................ more..

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