Society Walks

This was written around 17 about the people and places I had come to know and was getting tired of. I dropped out of school for the lack of inspiration and the same conformed, egotistical kids.

Society Walks

lets drive to the bottom of the sea

where society walks

and the followers crawl

kings and queens caught on black ice

where eyes see the mystified color of clouds

puzzled,

without an answer,

leaders break apart

microscopic criminals of refinement

sit and gaze upon their lighting of the show

free of distress and pain,

nobody owns the light

the darkness is swept away by the convicts

who turn richer into equal

one religion which is worthless

but approved by all

nobody is dragged by ropes

no anchors tied to stronger or smarter

a sensational unknown contributor

who has no past

changes the soil into gold

Kings and Queens in cells

Alone with their desolate jewels

Now…

Wake up!

Reviews

[Rene Salinas]

A moment of denouncing and very beautifully done too. As it is not charged with an anger that was to obliterate the situation in question as some of us lesser evolve might try to manifest but rather the recognition through observation that the place and the situation which the observer is inserted is full of uninspiring moments. As it looks around and sees the sensless mindless drones walking around through the inertia of Life it chooses to observe calmly because that is not what it wants. The unjistices of those who can and the imminent suffering of those who cannot. Not something that the observer wants to add more fuel. Religion which are an offering into something that complicates Life. No thankyou! The realazation that what we do is create our won prision.

The dream is over people time to bring a little conciousness to the fore and begin to help one another.


Great view and elegantly done.

[Solitary_Streets]

Thanks a lot, you definitely got my point of view! glad you feel the same way and I'm glad you liked the piece, thanks a lot for the detailed comment and understanding!

[KWP]

ahhh that's so cool ... yes a WAKE UP CALL no less ....brilliant stuff ... it's there - that life - it calls us each and every millisecond of our lives ... we just need to strip our souls bare and re-enter the water and dive to the bottom of the sea ... what a fabulous image xx

[Solitary_Streets]

Haha exactly! A wake up call! Do something different, do something bold! That's wha I'm trying to say. Anyways thank you for the comment and kind words and thanks for understanding! You're awesome thanks

[Laura Lynn]

pretty, so beautiful, we are like kings and queens all of us with these desolate jewels, I feel like I am swimming, I like this poem very much and KWP's way of putting it 'strip our souls bare,' and 're-enter' the water start over again, it is new everyday, I feel so uplifted

[Solitary_Streets]

Thanks a lot, I'm glad you liked it and I'm glad you feel that way! it's great getting comments like these and yes, KWP knows what she's saying! anyways thanks again and I love your writing!