moonfull

06/2014

the road I walk

is long and dark

winding and treacherous 

with creatures crawling

clouds swallowed the moon

on my side of town, you see

but that could never ever

stop me from feeling your glow

smiling, your light shines

in rhythm with yours

my heart always rhymes  

Author's Note

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Awe, I loved this poem. I could feel the love in it. And I could also feel the darkness as well. I really enjoyed the flow as well. It is short and too the point. Finding that one person that makes you happy even in the bad times is always a good thing. Darkness and then there is that one thing that draws you into the light again. Thank you for sharing. :)

[joshua deathdealer]

Thanks sis!! xx

[Angie Diane♥♥]

You are welcome. Love you!

[joshua deathdealer]

I love you. (:

Who else but you could walk the dark so intensely, without being afraid of it? this one really touched me, as it's a deja-vu of where I or we walked earlier. It's not only the light, of lights, but the light within you, that shines, through real raw and difficult moments, even you were not aware of it, it shone and made your shadow appear... intense, strong, and as only you can write... beautiful dear, I enjoyed it. Her light, shines together with yours :)

- Elisa

[sharonlee]

Graceful flow and warming. How lovely to read.

[Matching Socks]

When the lights go out, love still glows. :)
Beautiful Josh. :)

[V. P. Trujillo]

It's easy to give way to dark when engulfed in shadow, though shadow stems from a single source, light.

Light found is a good thing indeed, Josh. Whatever form it may take, treat it well, as it is you.

[Luna Zerimar]

"Clouds swallowed the moon"

I loved the personification in that line.

When I started reading this piece, I expected it to be gloomy.

But you picked it right back up with romantic ideas.

Clever, clever.

I certainly enjoyed this piece. Well done.