cry not

cry not

A Poem by joshua deathdealer
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06/2014

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Somberly they gathered

Silently they stared

At the hole in the ground

That would soon be filled

 

Once the proceed arrived

Tears fell with the rain

Wails lifted to the sky

And sobs intertwined

 

Memories laid on minds

With the approaching end

The closest fell to their knees

A sad and stygian sight

 

If they had only known

That this wasn’t the end

If they could have only seen

That she stood among them  



© 2014 joshua deathdealer


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It's deep, and rich, how you make contact here. I see her standing... I do. it's an insight from out of the sideline again, out of the body, it's you that can see both, it seems... chill bumps all over by this one... the music is perfect too ^^ there is always so much in your poetry were we all can learn from. Fantastic.

- Elisa

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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It's deep, and rich, how you make contact here. I see her standing... I do. it's an insight from out of the sideline again, out of the body, it's you that can see both, it seems... chill bumps all over by this one... the music is perfect too ^^ there is always so much in your poetry were we all can learn from. Fantastic.

- Elisa

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Joshua, this one has a very personal, spiritual message. The dead are not gone; they are still very much present and among us, whether we choose to see them or not. Great write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I enjoyed this free flowing poem with its deep meaning. It inspired me to write this short gift poem for you:

Spirit

Mournfully they gathered,
all eyes in a blare
for a life now shattered
each one unaware

of her essence scattered
here and everywhere.
Her life really mattered,
so don’t feel despair.


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

joshua deathdealer

9 Years Ago

Oh Thank you so much. You have picked up on the message and I am glad. (:

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joshua deathdealer

Casket City, FL



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"My trepidation of things past is not a song with a beginning, middle and end. But an endless symphony playing infinite variations on the same theme. One day of sadness fades into another and the .. more..

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