faceless

07/2014

if I have learned anything

in my thirty something years

it is that I can always 

count on You

show us this One

some will say

but I can't give You a face

You have no face

instead

You are inside me

and all around me

You are the morning 

reaching to save me

and the mist that rises

to embrace my skin

You are the deer 

standing still 

and the birds that sing

softly to the dawn

I can, however

give You a name

You are the Lord of my day

and the Proprietar of my night

no, I am not perfect

but within You

I am complete

Reviews

[Thea]

That was very lovely, Joshua. The feeling of love blossoming all over the place and having that someone to complete your day. Must be such a beautiful feeling. A fine poem from you, once again. You never fail to portray images of your words and thoughts. Great work. ^^

[SquinklaPsyOps]

I really enjoyed the poem.

It is really well done Great work.

[Draven]

This is a piece that I can view in several different ways. I like that. I can see love, peace, compassion, and spirituality. It makes the reader feel at home.

The invisible love, the faceless love, the love within you, that makes you, YOU.
With so much strength and believe, there is no face needed, true love is well spelled out here.

Gorgeous poetry, so on point!

- Elisa xoxo