foreigner

04/2011

            shadows from a deeper plane surround

         desperate to drag this soul down

  I've never been this close to stepping off the edge

            thanks to the disarray from the cataclysm of my life

          take it back, this black mood that wont lift

  please don't perpetuate this horror

           I cannot stand this disgrace, this disenchantment 

         this all to familiar sense of overwhelming reality

  it is like dieing over and over again every day

          like chasing a light I can never reach yet it never goes away

         how could I lose someone that I adore so much

  I am left quite of hope, a foreigner in your land

           the wraiths will win the second you die

Reviews

[Alicia Hirshey]

The imagery is amazing, almost awe inspiring. But that is nothing new with your poems.

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Nice. I love the imagery here.