A Humid Heat

A Humid Heat

A Poem by Josie E. Cook M. A.
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Worn out...

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A Humid Heat
A Poem by Josie E. Cook M. A.
" Worn out... "
A Humid Heat
Passing iron fences,
That surround the squares of lush green
Grass,
The rich's forbidden lawn,
With rhododendrons growing up the walks,
The heat beating down
Frying my brain,
Everything looks like it is shimmering
In the bright sun,
Cars parked along the street,
Their hoods and tops
Angrily throwing the sunlight
Back up into the sky,
I look through the grazed glare
Trying to find a place to sit
And cool down in peace,
Men climbing steps to higher
Places,
I grab a rail
Hoisting my tired legs up
And beyond the concrete
My strange gait showing my fatigue
As I see a cat perched on the windowsill
Staring back at me with curiosity
And maybe disbelief,
I'm incapacitated and shutting down,
My experience with this heat has
Given me a noonday headache,
Where bells are ringing in my head.
My dreamlike trance is the result
As I enter the coolness of the coffee shop
Seeking an ice cold drink,
I straighten my clothing and readjust
Only to see a long line at the counter,
Linen jackets and print dresses ahead of me,
They prevent me from finding the needed relief,
I go over to table and collapse,
No watching,
As I hear their droning voices,
I wait,
As a man folds his cuffs by the door,
I want distance,
I see the other side of the street,
Quiet there,
By a flowering terrace,
No roar or hum,
All directions in here are full of louder notes,
Too busy because I picked the wrong time,
Yet, I am out of the beating sunshine,
I gaze at the ceiling,
And look away,
It is an original design up there,
Not open to the sky or the light,
Another world where copper
Is found,
My seat is cushioned and soft,
I turn to a friendly smile,
"Here, drink this cool water, you look so
Wilted," she hands me the frosted glass,
My lips touch the ice floating inside,
My brow feels relief,
Suddenly, she is gone.

I drink the rest quickly,
My thirst is leaving,
I take in the shadows of the room,
It isn’t very large,
But, I feel far away here,
In a distant misty place,
But, the spinning has stopped,
There's a dim light reflecting from the
Wooden floors,
Reminds me of a glowing surface of a
Pond in the springtime,
Movement, she is back,
"Could you bring me some tea with lots of ice,
No sugar, maybe a fruity flavor,"
"Of course," she goes off,
Very kind, I feel lucky indeed!
--J. E. Cook (C) 2017

© 2017 Josie E. Cook M. A

© 2018 Josie E. Cook M. A.


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Josie E. Cook M. A.
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I actually pictured myself once upon a time when i was marketing in the heat i actually parked somewhere and started to observe my surroundings and saw birds the sun the trees and the lake and i couldnt help but think how thirsty i was ... i finally drove off and a woman said i looked flushed and tired but it was just from marketing it was from everything that i hadnt had a chance to sit down and acutally enjoy something anything no matter how small and i was offered a cold raspberry tea from that moment i drove back to the lake and took it all in happier than i did the first time.

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Josie E. Cook M. A.

5 Years Ago

Thanks, Lizzie.



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I actually pictured myself once upon a time when i was marketing in the heat i actually parked somewhere and started to observe my surroundings and saw birds the sun the trees and the lake and i couldnt help but think how thirsty i was ... i finally drove off and a woman said i looked flushed and tired but it was just from marketing it was from everything that i hadnt had a chance to sit down and acutally enjoy something anything no matter how small and i was offered a cold raspberry tea from that moment i drove back to the lake and took it all in happier than i did the first time.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Josie E. Cook M. A.

5 Years Ago

Thanks, Lizzie.
A very nice journey in your words leading to a good ending. A offer of a drink on a hot day. A true blessing. Thank you Josie for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Josie E. Cook M. A.

5 Years Ago

Thanks again for your thoughts! :)
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are welcome Josie.

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Added on November 12, 2017
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Josie E. Cook M. A.
Josie E. Cook M. A.

urbana, OH



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I have recently received my second degree for Antioch University Midwest in Creative Writing. Poetry is my passion along with digital photography, painting, and fiction writing. I make my own jewelr.. more..

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