We Can Never Go Back

Go outside

See the sunlight

you are free

this is the season for goodbye

transitioning to a better world

for not just this girl

Toki with her black and white skin lie breathless and still

No more tricks or flips because she ate her last rotten fish

So don't buy a ticket for the cheap and fake thrill

We will shut down Miami Aquarium ,sea world and this big sea circus

The world may still become darker

With His love and Toki's faithful reminding spirit

 hearts will no longer be hardened

Mercy remains in it

I guess the married people are stuck

Spouses losing the interest in a daily good f**k

Now all are left to hunger

aimless wonder

they dont want to cheat

they want to be reminded of their own heartbeat

but now live without any power

The vows remain for better or worse

there is nothing more except this curse

i see its not love

you are stuck

love doesnt terrify

love doesn't abuse

love takes a stand when its scary to choose

but i can no longer believe in you

my bestie say he dont believe my news

I have cracked before

for he is the only one I truly adored

his kiss is the only one to wake me up

I can leave this bleak world and swim in the sea of dreams

when he kisses me i am weak in the knees

I guess its good to feel it once

even though it just makes you feel so dumb

Oh cupid please make the next a match with everlasting love

the next time you throw an arrow in the hunt

I must stay determined

I cant look back

i take of this arrow so embedded in me

It cracks and out comes the poison in a waterfall sweep

still he is in deep

i called out his name

within the last embers of what was once an eternal flame

like i know he calls mine

in the shower

in our secret hour

for no one else's touch comes with the same power

after our last i bury whatever was deep in the sand

to grow a new flower

I look to the new Toki tattoo on my hand

she will always reminds me life doesnt give you what you want

but sweetly I hear this new command

we can never go back.

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

You go through your sadness so visually, line by line, tis as if you were rehearsing a role in a tragedy, ad libbing part of the script you cannot or do not want to say.. they're too near the truth. I could almost feel your misery. A powerful poem, butterfly, worthy of a change of mood.

[butterfly]

Thanks for coming by to read my poem. i appreciate it. I am honored you saw it as a powerful poem. Thanks for the powerful review :)

[Chris Shaw]

So much sadness in these lines you have penned. Sadly life doesn’t give us all that we want, that is so true. Relationships that don’t work are the cause of much pain and heart ache.

we can never go back

the final line of your poem. A resolve to look forward to the future and happier times. You have ended on a positive. Beautiful poetry butterfly.

Chris

[butterfly]

Thanks Chris, as always for another beautiful review