And I told Him No

I went out with someone new
he took me for sushi at Kansai
Tried to get me drunk on sake
2 orders of large
Maybe to get me to open my heart
or my legs
or my arms
then he took me to a look out point
then he leaned and said do you want to make out
what is my answer to the boy
for the sushi and sake always brings joy
but i still could make a choice
but the scar I wear still makes me think of another boy
that to only consummate now would just be filling the void
under the dark starry sky
he invites me out of the car to hike
there is hardly any lights
but the stars that shine clear
whispering to me be careful dear
we are your guardian angels
keep your eyes on me
and we will help you see
and i told him no
then he put his white Lexus in gear and drives me home

Reviews

[poetgurl (Plainly Meg)]

but the stars that shine clear
whispering to me be careful dear
we are your guardian angels
keep your eyes on me
and we will help you see

I LOVE this write, I really like this part.
one amazing write here

[butterfly]

Hello Poetgurl! I really love that you love this piece. Thank you for taking the time to read and leave another lovely review. It is appreciated so much :)

[Rachid Amrani]

Beautiful poem. You grabbed my attention form the first line I read. Your choice of words is excellent. You did a great job incorporating the story narrative into the poem. It reminds me a lot of Homer's Odysseus. Great job.

[butterfly]

Hello Rachid! Thank you so much for this beautiful review and coming to read my poem!! Very appreciated :)

[Rachid Amrani]

You're very welcome. Thank you for sharing.