most days

youtry breaking up with someone aafter a year and five months. she/he will then try to blame you for it, most of the people you hang out with hate you or threaten to punch for something that happened by pure accident that wasnt even your fault.

your ex treats you like your the biggest jerk out there. and all youve got left is one good friend, and your family, oh and they arent that crazy about you to begin with. your little sister/brothers dont like you at all, your parents think your a smartelic just because your a teenager and happen to be right about something every once in a while.

 

yourtreated like your a lazy blob even when you do your work every night like youve been told. but in the end it doesnt matter they treat you the same. your siblings call you names for no reason lazy, jerk, stronger terms.

 

other times its all ok but this is what its like for me most days, so when you think youve got it bad read my story, im sure i dont have it the worst but this is how it feels for me ALOT.

Reviews

[misha]

Such a powerful write. You conveyed your emotions very well through this. Great job!

[jrkwriter]

Thanks, I wrote that a long time ago. I was so angry and upset when I wrote it that I made alot of grammatical errors and I didn't make much sense. I should rewrite it but I like to keep it there as a reminder or most days.lol

[misha]

I wouldnt change it at all. You wrote it out of emotion instead of trying to be grammatical correct. I love it because of that :-)

[jrkwriter]

Well thank you :) I appreciate it :)

[misha]

You are welcome :-)

[Echoes of Eros]

What a powerfully expressive glimpse at a life on the edge. Hit hard, knocked down, and time and again having to rise up to make it through another day. I remember days and years like this. If you're going through it right now, and not just writing from past experience, I hope you get through it soon. It's a rough place to live.

[jrkwriter]

Thanks for the review! I actually wrote this alittle over two years ago. Not a whole lot has changed. I appreciate your concern

[Echoes of Eros]

I do so hope you'll see some changes this year. Sounds like it's time!

[jrkwriter]

Yeah, thanks again!

[Emily B]

you find yourself in the writer's seat now, how are you going to change your story?