Swan Dance

You see a willow tree, and fountains of youth sprinkle with a life
The memorable poetry the lake and all its waters sing with voice;
In stares from distance you prepare delight for flight
A simple option is for life and love is all your choice;
Two souls are merged and meant for love eternal
These ones are meant for joy and never-ending life.

Reviews

[Cherie Paregrine Isis]

This is one of the few poems I've read(so far in my life time living) that made me smile only half way reading it,it flows beautifully.

[JustWantLove]

Thanks for the review; actually, the dance of swans is the perfect portrayal of two innocent and beautiful souls, dancing in bliss, teaching the human mind and heart to yield to its lessons, to learn of the humble peace and educating our imaginations on how to be the better lovers, through kindness and gentle expression. The tenderness of passion, kindness and closeness, is what I see when I watch two swans unite.

Thank you for your review/comments and your imagination! Happy New Year!

[Bullet Soul]

This is beautiful! It says so much, in such few lines. It brings to mind witnessing a beautiful romance take place, one so beautiful that no words can describe how meaningful it really is. As you watch, only your favorite romance poem comes to mind, seeming to put this moment's true depth and beauty into perspective. With a few lines from one of your favorite poems, you are able to capture that romantic moment forever.

This is probably far from what you were trying to portray with this poem. My mind tends to wander to many different places when I read poems like this one. But regardless of what this poem said to me, and what it was supposed to say, these six lines are deep, moving, and beautiful poetry. Amazing job!