Priceless

You don't know what you've abandoned!

 Worlds, filled with golden rain and fairy-tale mystique, look closer!
 Feel heartbeat (one,two,three); inspired by the Ecstasy Herself;
 The deepest volumes of the steepest wonders burn in ignorance,
 What was let-go is Priceless, but you're blind;
 Tore up a piece of God in me and forced me to my knees to plead,
 Spat blood in torment, crucified and charred my hopeful mind.
 One in a Million, someone real, beyond belief, and kind,
 I swore to heavens still that it was real, true love I were to find...
 Betrayed, erased from history, existence faded, photos burned;
 This chest cut-open, heart removed, you..have deserted me, but:
 God has Loved+my+soul+restored!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. Love and life can beat us down. Just need to be able to pray and find the comfort of being at peace and restored. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[deeps]

I like this alot. So well said here. This is wonderful really it is. Just remember with God all things are possible. Like this