If You're Reading ...

 Repeatedly knocking on door, inviting...
 Humbly proposing without word,
 See you...
 I, knew it all along something was new,
 Years, thirty have - passed-by without you,
 Each day was Spring, moistened with hope
 Embraced by life from morning mist and dew;

 Right next to you, dwell I..persist,
 Dare-to, insist, seek heart and wish,
 Felt something different, unknown how,
 And still...
 Memories that passed cannot be lost,
 If heart is love, then love is life,
 I love you,
 You don't know it,
 I am yours,
 You're mine.
 Remember me,
 To me you are the Most.

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

Ah...a heart that loves for all of time. Very nicely written!!

[Cassandra D.]

this was a very wonderfully written poem.

[Katie]

Inspiring love is the greatest of all. The flow of this poem was very nice and the passion throughout the poem was very clear.. Keep writing! :)

[Theresa]

The words flowed along perfectly as if they were a song. It was beautiful and romantic. Another heartfelt and wonderful piece.

[emmajoy]

A beautiful poem showing great writing and a deep, sincere love ..

[::Yv0nne::]

This is so beautiful and your passion is very evident:)

If heart is love, then love is life,
I love you,
-->>Your words are so touching...they come from the heart....waiting patiently for the one you love:)
....Awesome poem....

[MK and MF]

Whatever girl ends up with you will be lucky to have such a passionate person as their partner.

[jenniewren (J.W. Bouwma..]

ahhh there is a yearning and a confidence in this that is beyond appealing.. wonderful write, my friend.. it moves my heart

[Buddhistboy73]

I really enjoyed this powerful piece of writing. This evokes great pictures of romance + your heart there in the piece...and i loved the last line. Keep writing fella!

[Gandré]

a wonderful journey of light ... times good and al mood of hope and dream..
"Each day was Spring, moistened with hope" I liked this very much! rhetorical flourish..