Balance of You

Something new...

Do tell me:
   What is it called to be yourself?
Do share:
   Where are we placed in life's own shelf?
Do write:
   Why is it hard to be unique?
Indulge my curiosity:
   Is life of meaning really so bleak?
Unlock the treasure box:
   What lies beneath the jaded smile?
Tickle my heart:
   Are we supposed to be apart?

Hold still, and think it through,
Be real...
Do tell me, please..who are you?
Can you feel?

Unique is new
Unlike all else
Your heart+My heart
Relax
Let's Dance

Reviews

[MK and MF]

[Gandré]

she will respond the romance ... she is a rebel.. We are unique in the eyes of the observer, never in our own eyes.

[closed account]

this was great!!! I love the last party
RELAX LET'S DANCE!!!!! LOVE IT!!
let go stop being uptight, be liberal life is too short!!
great work!

[DELETED]

I love this poem, it's written soo well xD

[Katie]

Unique is exactly what this poem is. I love how every question is almost a reflection of life. The end really puts its all together- through all the worrying- everyone just needs to relax and dance! :) I loved this.