A Seranade of Hearts

A Seranade of Hearts

A Poem by JustWantLove
"

In a mystical manner, in the worlds of the unknown; on the property of the Manor, when life comes to push and shove...

"

(..the rhythm of life suggests,
to dream for always!)



Through life I've learned
Besought  in  vigor - sung
Music of poetry portrayed
Fulfilled a recipe of life and in
Perfection of the hope for one
Vocabulary  dried - all  gone
Used all I know to  give - I'
Honor you with new, the
'Language  of  the  calm'
To You, I fly..and die!


(..Love, never dies!)

© 2010 JustWantLove


Author's Note

JustWantLove
...through the corridors of choices, and the plethora of unknown voices; life spent writing, volumes of emotions shown, one proof of Love should be adored and known: once reached the height of expression and released everything of possession, the one that I will befriend the most, from now on is, the silence of the ghost. The gaze is everlasting in emotions...

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Beautiful. Not much more that I can say than that, Im afraid.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love your note: "...the one that I will befriend the most, from now on is, the silence of the ghost." That one thought is perfection in and of itself and one to which I can totally relate.

Love lost is like a double-edged sword. On one side, it is the most beautiful thing ever. On the other, it weeps. For once that sweet, ethereal, transcendental, forever-after kind of love has been experienced, settling for anything less is treason to the soul.

"I hold it true, whate'er befall;
I feel it, when I sorrow most;
'Tis better to have loved and lost
Than never to have loved at all."

Excerpt from Alfred Lord Tennyson - "In Memoriam"


Posted 14 Years Ago


Beautiful poetry my friend. I'm not as puzzled by this as some. I get it. Well penned and a jolly good write. ~ Helena

Posted 14 Years Ago


I have trouble understanding this I read it twice ad get the idea of it but i cant follow the abstract of it well It y failing i aM SURE

Posted 14 Years Ago


She's the one who's unprecedentedly impressed by you, intransigently iterating your string of benevolently exotic virtues to whomsoever she encountered, she's the one who's inexorably possessive about you, for you seek, and you can't resist.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was truly a touching piece.
Thanks for sharing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


i think its about love and self realization. i really liked it

Posted 14 Years Ago


Though the poem sounds good. I am a little confused whether its about love or self revelation?

Posted 14 Years Ago


I reread this a few times trying to find the meaning and I'm left still thinking and tyring to figure it all out. I love poems like that though. The ones that keep you thinking long after you finished reading it. Nicley done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is rather different but just your style. Nice work.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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JustWantLove

*bleep*, IL



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* You will either love me, or hate me. Love, being the cataclysmic, overwhelming abundance of passion, hope and enduring. I am not for the fain of heart. Real, daring, blunt .. human. I am..in a.. more..

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