Fragrence of the morning dew

Fragrence of the morning dew

A Poem by Jon Roggie

Just a keepsake.

Something to remember,
  day to day,
  help to be strong.

Rain fell over night,
  cleaned the air,
   washed the streets

On a new morning,
  for a moment,
  tale a breath.

© 2013 Jon Roggie


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Such a beautifully soothing piece. I just love the morning after it rains. Just, the last line says,"Tale a breath." I'm sure you meant to put "take".

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jon Roggie

11 Years Ago

Thanks. Morning smell is invigorating. Leads to a bit of creativity. Was surely tale not take. T.. read more
'Something to remember,
day to day,'

clean, fresh, the new day with all its possibilities cleansed by the rain. a nicely structured piece. fantastic.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jon Roggie

11 Years Ago

Thank you. This was a pleasant write.
What a lovely fragrance...and a refreshing write..

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jon Roggie

11 Years Ago

Belated thanks, my friend.
Renée

11 Years Ago

my pleasure ( :
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~ wow... that is an empowering image... ~ i need to do this... to take each day at a time... and stay strong... this is how i live...

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Jon Roggie

11 Years Ago

It is a lot easier to notice the wrong. I try to work at spotting the rest. Thanks princess.
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11 Years Ago

~ yes, you're right... and...the privilege is all mine... :)
Not a typo at the end.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Jon Roggie
Jon Roggie

Porterville, CA



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