Make your point

I am not that old,
  but I still believe in the ideal of days gone by.

Couple of years from fifty,
  still growing up.

Now,
   the fun part begins.

Talk to me as a child,
  I will respond as a child.

Talk to me as a pol,
  I will dismiss you as a pol.

Forget the lines circulated year after year.

So,
   without slogans,
  or catch phrases,
  make your point.

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A pure powerful message, well done!

[Jon Roggie]

Thank you sir!

[Yellow Butterfly]

You don't mince your words....

Executed very well

[Jon Roggie]

Thank you. I can be a bit direct.

[Yellow Butterfly]

That's cool... I'm old enough to know not to take it personally...

I liked it...

[Matthew Kult]

Hello Jon,

Arrogantly Honest. Some people just need to be slapped
well done.

Always,

Matthew
A.

[Jon Roggie]

Thank you sir. I tend to be a bit blunt sometimes.

[Matthew Kult]

Nothing wrong with that.

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~ wow... there are a lot of people i want to say this to... this piece is very strong and powerful...

[Jon Roggie]

By now, you know me. All I want is honest answers, not excuses. Thanks!

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~ yes... me too... i am constantly looking for those honest answers...