Care to take my hand?

Simple dance.
What could be the harm?

Whirl away the moment.
Steal a bit of time.

Eyes meet,
  and memories pass.

Give me a grin.

You speak first.

"Care to take my hand. "

Reviews

[Photochick]

NICE!

[Jon Roggie]

Had fun with this one, Deb!

[asdarkeyesclose]

Whirl away the moment.
Steal a bit of time.

always something original and unexpected on your pages, they say first impressions are very important and that you never get that chance twice. i liked the light flirtation here. fantastic.

[Jon Roggie]

Thank you! I never know what is going to happen til afterward. Makes it fun!

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~ how sweet... but i can see you always get the other person to speak first... very clever... :P

[Jon Roggie]

Now how could you say that Serah? Heh!

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~ haha... :P ~ it's good to read all poems by the poet... then one can say stuff... :P