Reminded by a friend

Just a comment,
  from a friend I consider a brother.

"You light up the room!"

Someone who knows me,
  maybe better than I want to accept.

Now,
  I feel like I should be quiet.

Maybe,
  just  a little more subtle.

Reviews

[paul]

contemplative. and humorous !

[Jon Roggie]

Even while having a little fun, I have to put in a bit of thought. Glad you liked it!

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~ oh god... you are already so subtle... please don't become more subtle... :P ~ and you do light up this site too, monsieur jon... i love reading your work... ~ you are the infinitely poetic, quiet, sensitive, perceptive and wise dude... :)

[Jon Roggie]

I don't know. I have been thinking about turning the title into the poem, and just having one word or sentence in the body.... Could be fun!

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~ well... i'm looking through my new binoculars and this piece looks perfect to me... :P ~ but you're the boss and if your heart says you should make changes, you should make changes... :)