May I just give a wink or a smile?

May I just give a wink or a smile?

A Poem by Jon Roggie

I understand your system.

Granting points for a few extra words.

I could care less.

Use few words,
  and try to share some feeling.

Recognize a moment of talent,
  not going to gush like a critic.

Only want to acknowledge the creation.

So,
  let me give a tilt of my chin,
   glint from my eye.

Keep your points.

Let me show my respect,
 bit of appreciation.


© 2013 Jon Roggie


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I never did give the system a look and really had no idea about the front page..until a few months ago when "someone" was miffed I was a top read and mentioned it on my poem...then talked as if I was the enemy to another..using words like when "they take me down"...
that i must say was eye opening.. I don't send out rr...so it was in the top spot quite on its own without my knowledge..
I still write because it calls to me and I embrace it..what ever comes forth.. I read and comment on what what I wish here...I am just grateful for a place to show my work... and people like you that understand the art and not the numbers .. great food for thought poem

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jon Roggie

10 Years Ago

The funny thing is, I am more irritated by the restraints on reviews. I can't get away with just sa.. read more
Renée

10 Years Ago

I hear ya Dear Tortoise...on the review restraints.. I am not usually one for a lot of words..seem.. read more
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:: i completely agree with you... there are too many rules on this site... and the latest one... about how many characters to type... is a bit too much... :: very well articulated, mister turtle...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jon Roggie

10 Years Ago

I need to check. I think I can still get away with my usual one word followed by exclamation points.. read more
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10 Years Ago

:: the system asks for 'at least' ten characters... :P
From reading this poem I get the feeling that you don't want a review to be worth points, but just be a review coming from a critic. You have a good point there. Maybe more reviewers, if the points weren't given unless it was rated as being constructive, would give better reviews. This simple poem speaks a lot of words, to me that is haha.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jon Roggie

10 Years Ago

I see no point to the point system, excuse the pun. Prefer the chance to throw out some random thou.. read more

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Jon Roggie
Jon Roggie

Porterville, CA



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