Water

I can only try to explain,
  but I feel I will fall short.

Something required for life,
  and still much more of an influence.

From giving water to the dead,
  or share water my brother.

Time when you took my friend's father.
  My friend.

The current shapes me.

Reviews

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:: beautiful piece... very profound and overwhelming poetry... water is so essential and so meaningful too...

[Jon Roggie]

thank you Princess.

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:: my privilege, mister glowing poet... :)

[Leona Cieri]

Hmm, interesting poem; simply stated yet causes many thoughts to incur. Loved the last line and the twist of the meaning of the word current. Nice job! ^^

[Jon Roggie]

I am all over the place with this one, so I appreciate your kind words! Jon.