me wow

a short poem

Just get a grip, you crazy dog.

Running in circles, eyes all agog',

living for walkies, begging for treats,

relax little buddy, don't try to compete.

I am Feline,

the superior race.

A queen cloaked in fur,

I rule this place.

So little canine

think, as you crouch,

don't cross the line

and stay off my couch!

Reviews

[Rene Salinas]

Hmmm as I was reading the first lines I had to salivate I think it was a reflex a little panting went on as well there is something to be said about how the unconcious works. And yet again I find traces of female superiority. It must be something on the water today and is it just me or the dog is your submissive?

So that thing about women cooking and having babies doesn't hold no more?

Just messing.

This made me smile all the way

Thankyou

[Matching Socks]

Ok, I love this poem, shows feist!
It could simply be about a cat and a dog, or it could be about a woman seriously dissing a guy.
Either way it's a fun read.