Sand's Edge ~ Moonlight's Edge

Sand's Edge ~ Moonlight's Edge

A Poem by Diamondjules

Footprints along the Sand's Edge

One pair of prints ~ now Two, leave their shadowy Face

 

Pockets that once held One pair of Hands

Now are free to caress and intertwine with another's ~ in a tingling Embrace

 

A Journey Holds a Mystery Timeless

 

And reaches Love Liquid

It's Moonlight's Edge

 

 

© 2008 Diamondjules


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Diamondjules
Enjoy the Visual!

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Beautiful write... my favorite line/ image is ; "And reaches Love Liquid
It's Moonlight's Edge".... PERFECTION SISTER!




Posted 13 Years Ago


Very nice
Especially this line
"A Journey Holds a Mystery Timeless"
Beautiful
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Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice visuals here in your soft poem. There is nothing like the sand and the moonlight! Great combination and also the pictures within you create!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very powerful sister. Your words remind of the poem Foot Prints or even a visit from a Spirit that watches over one passionate being.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes..the visual. Your love of the sea and it's mystery really comes through in this piece. It is almost universal, this fascination..even mixed with the fear many people have, there is something magnetic about it.
I think I believe in God, but sometimes I feel an ancient pull back to the sea. I loved this write. Rain..

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on February 27, 2008

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Diamondjules
Diamondjules

Raligh, NC



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