death

what could this be? 

im falling into this black obis 

looking only up and yet i see nothing but darkness 

nothing but the cold feeling of souls 

the dense feeling of death upon me 

death is gazing into my eyes and im gazing back 

fading back to black i fall into pits of despair

nothing to grab i am left all alone 

i am alone, i am alone 

the dark seas crash over me once again 

i am alone 

all there is awaiting for me is death  

blood splattered everywhere 

every inch of my hair 

splattered everywhere 

blood,guts and the remains of my love for you  

like the sun changes so do you 

your the darkest thing i have seen 

using me for only what you need 

Reviews

[julia senpai]

thank you =^-^= i like that my poetry is liked

[Jamestown]

This is sad, but I could really feel the pain. The last couple lines grabbed my heart, been there, thanks for sharing.