My guy

My guy

A Poem by playful>Julie xD

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The smile on your face never last long with you

although I try to make things better

I can never put that smile on your face and keep it that way

Its different with you and I love it about you

your the one for me, my other hole.

 

As you say you love

forever and ever

I no it will not change but will it last

as I beleave that love dies in time

and to be left with a broken heart.

 

I want to dry those tears that you cry

the sadness inside and I cant stand to see you cry

I love you, you love me

Its this feeling that could last and I hope that it does.

 

I take your hand and hold you close

I never want to let go and nver say goodbye

I hope this love will last as long as you and me

a life time who knows lets not think

Just live in the now and be happy for now.

© 2009 playful>Julie xD


Author's Note

playful>Julie xD
I wrote this about Shawn, lucky he wont see it inless I tell him bout it Lol.... =D



Reviews

another very good clean write I enjoyed the read thank you for sharing :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very cute, I'm sure he'll love it

Nice work!

Orlando M

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is such a wonderful, lifting write! Love that is determined and strong, lasting and giving. Beautiful work!

Posted 14 Years Ago


validation, vindiction, complete observation of a true testament, a poem in itself but from a poetic standpoint
hard to give gestures in such regards.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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playful>Julie xD
playful>Julie xD

newark, CA



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my name is Julie Ann Tutorow and some people call me Julia, so whtev u want to call me is fine. im 15 my b-day is november 6 1993 i love tp draw and write i live in c.a. newark.. more..

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