dear deer

dear deer

A Poem by Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)
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saw a pic of a deer and quickly jotted this down listen to Clair de Lune by cLAUDE dEBUSSY if possible whilst reading this.

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DEAR Deer
Dear deer
please do try not to fear
the awful bullets that surround you now
the squishy footsteps you hear in evenings glow
the men that laugh as they caught your mate
the closing scary crash of the farmers gate
dear oh deer
please do not fear this so
just go and graze in meadows low
just go and be a beauty to behold
and I will pray for you my deer
i will pray that you live to see another day
and make it through lifes awful fear
so dear Deer do not fear
but for you I do fear
so......
just close your ears
and pretend that hunters are not so near

© 2021 Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)


Author's Note

Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)
i am totally against hunting

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I had a close encounter with one the other day while riding my motorcycle on a country road. Aside from worrying about it crashing into me, my thoughts for it's safety were much like this poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

2 Years Ago

Yes beautiful creatures
Hope you are well
Thanks for that
I'm not sure whether this was intended to be serious, but it does have a very absurd vibe to it what with the amusing play on words, and the flow of seeming desperation to console the animal. Couldn't help but let out a giggle. Well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

6 Years Ago

Lol my writings mad get used to it ha ha sorry I write in haste I should take more time but I cram .. read more

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Added on June 18, 2017
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Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

Sydney , Australia



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Amateur old poet well not that old but not a young 20 anymore I live to write I write at least five poems ditties every weekend and a few during week I write quickly it just flows and bu.. more..

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