Gone

You have gone
Where No one
Not one will dare to follow
It's place is far away
Your eyes must be sallow
May the sun the stars the rain
And the moon
Cast you no evil shadow
May God have a plan
Of what and why he took you far away from me
May God bless the ground
That you once walked with me
May God give me grace
And strength as
I go alone
Through this misery
With you gone from
Me

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

Losing someone who is dear to our hearts can be down right heart stealing and numbing at the same time.

May the sun the stars the rain
And the moon
Cast no evil shadow

Those words are profound thinking and deeply emotional.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

It is hard to understand why we lose loved ones, but we will eventually find the answer in our soul when we just believe in God's plan.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Actual pic I took at the entrance nsw

[emipoemi]

wonderful. fluid, solemn, and very well structured. Well done!

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Thanks for your review

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Wrote this of my departed love ones