stickable

a love poem

till the unstickable sticks

till the unstoppable stops

till the invincible fails

till the unmovable moves

till the unruly rules

till the unattractive beautifies

till the unlonely feels alone

till the unworthy feels worthy

till the unforgiven feels forgiven

till the ice no longer melts

till the snow no longer white

till the sun no longer shines

till the stars stop their sparkles

till the moon goes black

till the oceans run dry

till the desert fills with water

till the birds do not fly

till the volcanoes don't spit

till the rain and lightning and 

thunder ceases

till the birds go quiet

till the fish gasp for air

till the horses and wild beasts are things

of history

till the dogs are just statues in some forgotten

parlour

till the cats are just in picture books

till the music is so quiet we cant hear the tune

I shall love you till all these things happen

even longer

because you are my world

we wont outlive these things

we will die long before the end

but when you die

it will be my end

till the sun don't shine

ill love you baby

till the moon pales

we shall stick

stick

stick to me

stick to you

till the end of time

till the inevitable

the end

we shall stick

you and me 

just two old sticky stickers

who stuck together

till our time 

our end

it will come

the moon 

it will

get stuck

turn black

one day

we both knew that 

day will come

but

we both stuck

stacked our future

stuck in sticky 

days 

don't you just love

our loving stick together ways

the moons not black yet

lots of sticky stuck together days

babe ill love you till the moon

turns  black babe

and the sun no longer paves our way

and the stars no longer sparkle

babe

you and I babe

well stick together yet babe

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Oh hadn't even thought of that song when I wrote it I didn't copy all my stuff original but great song thanks for review

[Ken Simm.]

This is a chant to love and that is what attracted me to it in the first place. Then I started to see some of the serious layering here.
I always used to say I would never like any poem with babe in it. Here I'm prepared to make an exception. This is a true song.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Ken thanks so much
Wasn't sure if I should take out second part

[Ken Simm.]

AS I read it with that in, I would say no. It gives a counterpoint to the very beautiful first part.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

ok so leave it in or take out? sorry early here lol

[Ken Simm.]

Leave it in. It adds. In my view.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

ok cheers thanks