Green

Lol

And My chicken wings did burnt
Cos I did ran a bath with
Red wine on the hop
Forgetting to turn that dang hob down
So low
The smoke it burnt mine eyes
Its flavours of smoky lavender
In my hot tub I now soak
I sip mine wine
Till the fire
Traps me bare and white oily naked
To the fireman I say
Close your eyes
And open that damn door
As I hobble to the lawn
So green
And my derier is there
For all to be seen
Fat and oily white against
That stark long grass so green

Reviews

[splattercore]

Forgetfulness, the absent minded slips into a coma of thoughtless recklessness. Never once remembering the destruction one can wreak with their cause and effect. It may be bliss to walk around with such ignorance. But it only lasts so long until it hits the fan... In other words, this was freaking hilarious!

[Done]

Oh this is funny. I'm brought back to times of burning things on the stove when your attention gets pulled by something else. They say your memory is the first thing to go. I don't remember what they say goes next. ha ha. I like this in any case. Thanks for sharing.

[Einstein Noodle]

oh my goodness ..first...the language reminds me of those Native American poets who combined the linguistics of their English and Native way of talking it...it lends a folk flavor ..a down home regular person one can relate to ... i love this Julie .. next time i suspect she will have not learnt her lesson .. the hob gets cranked and those wings get burnt ... i love hot tubs ..and do the same ..even when i am berled pink! ;) delightful read ma'am .. simply delightful
E.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Ahh Thankyou so much
So unexpected
I see this as one of my most silly ones ha ha

[Einstein Noodle]

the humor isn't lost on me ...but i would not say silly ... its more important than "silly" says i!

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Thankyou so much

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Thankyou all for kind review s

[emmajoy]

Love to laugh just before bedtime, promises happy dreamsl Soooooo, thank you very much: your words are far better than pills!!!

For some reason i think of an artist called Beryl Cook when I read this a third time! Hugs.. and thanks. x

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the places you described and the visions create by your good words. I would scare the neighbors if I was bare-a*s outside. Thank you Julie for sharing the amazing poetry. Made me smile this morning.
Coyote

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Lol thanks for all reviewers and reviews
Just for a laugh

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Ha ha ha - great bit of humour and prose; just to note however - I'd stick to a KFC home deliver from now on! Bless ........... :-)

[Paul Bell]

Now come on. You just wanted six hunky guys giving you the fireman lift. Which I'm all for.Only, It's the body oil thing. You just can't lift women with body oil on. So lets do this again tomorrow, minus the oil. lol

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

No not true
Lol Annette
Ha ha