the neighbours

the neighbours

A Story by Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)
"

writing as I go be gentle

"
She waved to him as she drove off to work that day
the man who lived across the way
in makeup off she smartly went
he in shorts so often bent
and weeding his garden he
tended there
he tended a single red rose bush there
so neatly it sat primly there
she came home that night
he was still there in dusky light
he lay across the grass so wet
his hose lay there still dripping yet
his mouth awash with grief
the grassy moss lay underneath
in his hand he tightly clasped
a farewell note
to her it wrote
""I''ve loved you since i saw you there
im  80 you only  45 at most  there
i think we soul mates
forever more
But I know Im old and nearly done!
but in it ive writ my love song
to you""
she opened up the book
and with a glance her tears bestook
she  now truly really shook
oh what a sweet man i didnt know all
of these years
my neighbour loved me from afar
a yard so wide
with fences that neatly divide
another time i could of loved him too!""
she thought aloud to herself she did say
""he went to his grave
just loving you"" the son said then
his son came over and held her there
""this letter is from Dad
but its me who really cared!""
they rang the undertaker and the funeral home
she sat with him, that son she'd never ever met
till morning light
and they lit candles and talked all night
his father loved her as well it seemed
but the son loved her first
that night she sorta beamed
on his lounge she sat
sipping coffee freshly brewed
so in this tale of love and death
the son and neighbour
became an item and in love and
in grief they lived
but fathers grave
was tended often
by son and neighbour
now very much a proper item
they hosed and tended that rose bush
for ever more
and it grew no spikes
just strangely so
just red roses true
he told her meekly so
ill pick only for you
my neighbour
my true love
and my Dad's too xxx
she breathed in and out
and saw the love
their undyling love
no pure doubt
as she smelt
the perfumed
red rose
in it
she smelt the father dear
she remembered waving to him
in all good cheer
and the son
she loved him now
who was always ever
so swiftly near
the end

© 2018 Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)


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Please tell me to stop writing
I cant stop
its like a disease!!!

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Added on January 26, 2018
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Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

Sydney , Australia



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Amateur old poet well not that old but not a young 20 anymore I live to write I write at least five poems ditties every weekend and a few during week I write quickly it just flows and bu.. more..

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