#5

#5

A Chapter by yashmita13

everyone was in the same place;
the same situation, 
waiting
for the same destination 


© 2015 yashmita13


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The poem create place and situation. Left the reader with the need to know more.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago
The last place where all the people will together.
Your short lines are huge.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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 Added on January 22, 2015
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