"message me"

"message me"

A Poem by Prose-full
"

"Conversations within....."

"

text message.

message in a bottle.

send it out to shore.
just please get it to me....


it's me that's craving an opportunity to have some sort of connection with you..
i've sent an email.

i've sent a postcard.
i desperately need to connect
yes, i am over here..

and i am calling you....

my heart has a message for you

and my soul deeply wants to talk to yours...

 

 

heart break,

heart break hotel ..

i have visited them all.

time is now

for time out for this kind of thing...

 

...my heart is ready.
 i know it is..

it told me so.
and my soul wept..

she cried out:

 


"when.....

when will we have one of those for ourselves...

when can we lay with another soul,

..and exchange laughter,

love making, and all the other intimacies....

are we in punishment dear heart...

is our love on hold,on  lay-a-way..was ours denied or not activated..

what have we done to feel this heartless fate......

i am ready

i am ready

i am waiting,

we.are.waiting;

we..are already ready.."

© 2008 Prose-full


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incredible job shean!
i'm really loving this.
it makes me sad though to know this is you it's about.
you deserve to be happy and to find love.
i hope that you keep on writing spectacular pieces darling. =]]
i'm glad you sent me a request to read this.
great job!
monica. =]]

Posted 16 Years Ago


"...my heart is ready.
i know it is..

it told me so.
and my soul wept.."
this is so perfect...I love how you gave your heart and soul a say in this.
very passionate and full of longing .


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 22, 2008
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hey my creative brothers and sisters of the pen...it's been a long time and a lot has changed. I don't write as often, I've been busy with college essays...I still love the creative pen, though. I am.. more..

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