mother

Mother
I was searching for you
In every glimpse ,
In every tear
In my dreams,
In my life &
I found out
You are the brightest star
Shining up so high
Reeling under darkness
Making me smile
Mother your not with me
To share my comfort
My tears, my restlessness
My joy…
Mama,
Can i have you back?
Can i have that fairy in my life?
Can i have my shining star back?
Can't you plz come back?
Um broken and lost
I need you my fairy
I need you.

Jzaineb

Reviews

[Usman Muhammad]

Beautiful poem. There are few grammatical mistakes which you can correct.
It seems to me that you have started writing poems recently. You have good imagination and with time you will improve evidently. I wish you good luck with your future writings.