In a blink of an eye

In a blink of an eye

A Poem by writ rajat
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How two lover separated with each other, let us know

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""'',,,In a blink of an eye we got separated,,,,,
<3,,,,I don't know the times we have dated,,,<3
,,,,we met in a bus ,,,,,
,,I don't know what was happening inside me that time,,,
,,,as soon as our hands got touched,,,
,,,,,I felt down in such a rush,,,,,,

Glossy lips(Uff that tricks),
,,,,my heart hit me a hard kick,,,<3
She was sitting  in front of my  eyes,
but  talk couldn't be possible.....<3,
,,,,,,because we are unknown,,,,,,
in a blink of an eye,
we got separated

© 2013 writ rajat


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writ rajat
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Writ, I understand momentary rushes of sexual heat or even just a general blood-rush, that tingle we get when our sensory system is aroused. I can imagine a cultural taboo about speaking perhaps to a female stranger that you do not know as well. I'll bet buses in India are quite crowed, easy to get separated, but if you were not going to talk to her anyway(you two were unknown)! In the blink of an an eye is quick here as well as in India. Where was the cow in front of the bus when you needed one? (just a joke, Writ) Writ, what are all those punctuation marks all about? As well as the 3s?

Posted 9 Years Ago


in a blink of eye i must cry

Posted 10 Years Ago


Being attracted to a stranger can be very frustrating, writ, and I can feel the frustration in your words. Good job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


writ rajat

10 Years Ago

thanxx you very much
A little on the sad side but I like it ...Pen on...:)............

Posted 10 Years Ago


writ rajat

10 Years Ago

thanxx you
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)..............................

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