That morning

This is a story cum poem I want to narrate its very interesting must read

Once upon a time in morning,

I went to the jogging,

there I got surprised,

when a girl join my side,

because she was fast in the race,

I couldn't saw her beautiful face.

For this I ran a bit faster,

there she say me ''hello master'',

when our conversation became tight,

we stop at the off side,

we shake our hands and my heart got land,

bEcause I don't look like shah rukh khan,

I think its time to say bye,

but my heart do not allowed me,

my mouth do not allowed me ,

now we become good friends,

her name I can't mention,

Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

Writ, It seems that you and women have a touch and quickly let go thing, going on. Now, I do not know about male and female dating protocol in India or if the caste system is still practiced but, you seem to have an eye for the pretty girls. Do not be shy, Writ! Women like men who can drop an interesting evening of good conversation on them.

[La Luna]

This is really good, I love the way your words flow :)

[writ rajat]

thanks you very much

[Rachelle]

………………...Very cute! ………..

[writ rajat]

...................,,..thanks.......,,

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is very nice Writ.Well penned:)

[writ rajat]

vry humble thanks you

[Vidya Bacchus]

yOU ARE WELCOME.

[Ahena MK]

bEcause I don't look like shah rukh khan,!!!
LOL
really good !!

[writ rajat]

thanks you