A deaf's poem

Being a deaf is both good and bad.

Being a deaf is a good challenge,
That's why people people call me physically challenged,
I lost my ears,
In my life's seventh year,
No one cares,
No one have dare to walk on busy road,
Where anytime a bus can strike you ,
Where time death can kiss you,
Because girls don't like people like us,
I make my death my lover,
I always keep my lover in company,
Don't laugh at me you don't know my lover's power,
I don't have friends I don't have ears,
Don't laugh,
Just try one day of a deaf,
If you could not become mad next day ,
You will can laugh,
Just imagine you are in a dark place,
And your source of light gets stolen,

Reviews

[Psychotic Lily]

Your poem has very good imagery that makes me feel that I am deaf myself!

[alanwgraham]

Good - you have painted a good picture of how difficult it must be to be deaf and described the problems. I think your analogy of using blindness to help use understand the problems of deafness is good.
Well done with your story.
Alan

[L.C. Jarrette]

yes, you are right.being physically challenged is not easy...

"Being a deaf is a good challenge"
=>but i like this line.

[Peter Rogerson]

any time a bus can strike, not struck. And the last line gets not get. Not much. I'm being picky.

[writ rajat]

thanks it is done

[Peter Rogerson]

You're very welcome

[Peter Rogerson]

To lose one of your senses must make life very difficult. Well written with very few errors.

[writ rajat]

can you point out errors please....

[Weeping willow]

Wow! nicely expressed and makes you appreciate your hearing and your eyes and all the has blessed our lives.Keep writing your emotions will heal,God bless you.

[Mr.Writer]

This poem shows reality, emotions and feelings...
Well done, keep it up

[Sofia]

Nice write...quite true too...keep writing...
" Just try one day of a deaf,
If you could not become mad next day ,
You will can laugh, "
I liked these lines..

[Priyanshi]

Hmm, a powerful write...you said right, Rajat... Being physically challenged isn't easy, It has to face so many obstacles.
Good work....keep it up.