cigarettes at night

we chain smoked,
and stared at the ashes
turn into stars & constellations
filling up our lungs
with the black tar
on which we sat.

May 15th, 2016

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

Simple, beautiful image you have painted here.

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice description of two people. Sometimes cigarettes and good company. A perfect place to know. Thank you Kallie for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Elliott Thomas]

Very hypnotic! I love it!

[Polly]

This is such a vivid description which left me totally perplexed. This was a good read, thanks for sharing. :)