You Are My Inspiration

You are my inspiration

You help me up when I fall down

You are my motivation

Where I see tatters, you see gowns 

You are the rock that holds me under

When I'm lost without a guide

You're a local here, where we ponder;

There's no doubt you're by my side!

Rainbow fishes may swim overhead,

Eat one color at a time,

Or we might be underneath my bed;

Move and you will hear the chyme.

You help me up

you hold me down

You push me farther

Than I thought I could go

You are my ladder

You are my stool

You help me get down 

You bring me back up

You are my inspiration.

Author's Note

Constructive criticism/feedback? :)

Reviews

[mattavelli]

Hi, this is a nice tribute to a friend.
"You are the rock that holds me under" - this line threw me. Seemed you were being drowned.