Dream

A forgettable fading..

Dream

The silent echo of a summer breeze,

The faint smell of exotic flowers fill the night air,

The moon shines against the lake, 

Slowly drifting,

Slowly fading. 

The breeze rattles and shakes the deep green leaves, 

The bright orange daffodils,

The sea green waves of the ocean. 

You sit and stare into the night sky,

Overwhelmed by the aroma of summer,

Of the breathtaking beauty around you,

And you wake up, 

Restless and drowsy,

It was all just a dream. 

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[cfix]

I really enjoyed this write, This is well written.

"You sit an stare into the night sky" ah, just a minor error, you forgot the "d" at the end of "an".

it's simple, though I would have liked to see a little more detail. but that's just my personal preference. I gorge myself on detail.
But it's a very clean-cut write.

some things are too good to be true. they don't ever really last.