whisper of blood

whisper of blood

A Poem by DeathlyPoet
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� copyright 2008 Kandace Blenkhorn , all rights reserved

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Whisper of Blood

Blood on floor

walls and hands

Whispering to me

To help those in need

 

Broken hearted

shattered heart

Bleeding heart

to fix the hearts of others

 

whispers of the blood

to my heart in need

to forget the pain

forget the cause

 

save lives and feelings

keep safe the memories

of unshed blood

not to shed blood

 

Blood does whisper

to who needs the most

help of the others

that are not there

 

© 2008 DeathlyPoet


Author's Note

DeathlyPoet
Please excuse grammer and spelling mistakes.
some this you can't hold in

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I had to re-read it twice to make sure I understand. What I'm gathering is you want to save a life and how it plays around in your head as a thoughts is 'bleeding' whispers of doubt, of hope, of everything insecurity while so certain. Don't be afraid to reach out if you feel it's right, take the leap, others will join you, be a leader in this situation, maybe the time is now.

Posted 13 Years Ago


deep... that's all I can say...=]

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

where is all this coming from?

Posted 15 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 20, 2008
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DeathlyPoet
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