Compartment 114
Compartment 114
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People are strange

People are strange

A Poem by kaoswithak
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A magnified view, over things through a glass bottle.

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Your mirror broke into pieces
Your own reflection displaced in the floor 
You want to pick them up, but you can’t take it no more.


So many different  faces, although they seem the same
Falling further and further without knowing who to blame


My brain is trying to expand, but with the feeling that it has been caged
A box of mixes all with a different taste


Looking down into the unknown
Where I stand all alone
but the sun shines brighter
Where  fears subside
Going deeper and deeper
without knowing what is inside


What is it that we seek?

© 2018 kaoswithak


Author's Note

kaoswithak
Give me your thoughts and opinions! Also, if you see any grammar issue or misspel let me know, help me imporve my language.

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This is an intriguing concept. It's "reflection" not "reflation" (which means something completely different), and the third stanza (especially the second line) is a bit weird in musicality (and in regards to Line 2, the grammar is weird...I think you're missing a word). But on the whole, this paints a very solemn and profound picture of the world. Well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


kaoswithak

6 Years Ago

True, that was pure distraction mixing reflection with reflation, thanks!
emipoemi

6 Years Ago

my pleasure.

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