Winter

Poem Type: Tanka

Snow precipitates

Through the morning and the night

Making the grass hide

Causing the trees to shed leaves 

Forcing all into their homes

Reviews

[Soyam]

Your work seems to symbolize the "lost hope".
"The day will come , when all Snow will melt to water. And purity of Water will wash all the dirts and misery of life. The Snow must hold patience within you. After winter, the trees will bloom again , with grasses buzzing with sunlight. And everyone will out thereby again.