uni verse

neither a quatrain or a haiku., just a simple quick poem

 

 

 

   Not yet prey

                       

              To the schizoid memes

 

                Of 'us' and 'they',

 

                   We play and play

 

                   The one verse over and over.

 

 

 

                                     Walker, 2010

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

give it to me ,baby

Reviews

I read this through a couple of times, just liking the rhythm; the first three lines have something special about them.
I find this piece is hopeful at the beginning, saying 'we're not yet prey', but then the thought of 'one verse over and over' is a bit daunting, so its quite an interesting mix there.
I like it, very thought provoking.
Great piece.