Snake Eyes

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Set fire, a lotus lease; 
lead foot, you had to please
A Rising phoenix, those bright feathers gonna burn all tethers 
You had me at hello 
but now, more you show
The more flames cooking deeds, but its a slippery slope to the bottom, all in all, but still a cheat
Melting ice aint sucess but from my sweat is no less
Tower spitting to tower is just arrogence

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Abigail]

Interesting poem. I don't think I grasp the meaning of it 100% but I did enjoy reading it!