stone unwriten

my life is unwriten in this stone

what has been writen is eating me to the bone

 

you wrote on my life

with a bloodless knife

 

now i have nothing to make

but you have all to take

i see the heartless moon when i wake

 

you keep my unwriten stone behind bars

you replace words with scars

 

but now i hold this bloodless knife

and the stone that tells my life

 

now my life has been claimed

and this bloodless knife has been stained

Reviews

[scorpion-red]

this was nice such a simple flow but such an awesome sense of power within the words

[THE LOST ROSE]

Great piece. I enjoyed the one way conversation that you bought force. I saw this scene in a play once and these lines translated a different way. I enjoyed the flow, the passion and the power in this great piece. thanks for creating and sharing.