Bring my Writen to life

Bring my Writen to life

A Poem by karmic
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short poem. The part where it said cut my pages with a knife and bring my writen to life means if my writen is able to feel pain then it is alive.

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Put my blood on this page

over time let it age

let the chapters out of their cage

and let the blood rain over my words

and in your mind bring the rage

 

 Let it carry your heart

so you can re-read every part

 

let the words move you

set aside what was once true

 

Let the pages crattle your tears

just lend it an ear

 

Give it a chance to feel/and to speak

let it know it's real/and to that let the stories leak

 

 

cut my pages with a knife

and bring my writen to life

© 2009 karmic


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Love this! It got to me. In a good way.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I really like the idea of bringing your writing to life. Letting it feel, and feel pain. Let it be the bearer of all your emotion and pain, to carry all your burdens.
I wish it could come to life. Spectacular.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Hey this is pretty good writing here... I particularly like the first stanza:

Put my blood on this page

over time let it age

let the chapters out of their cage

and let the blood rain over my words

and in your mind bring the rage


It is sad and provoking.. let the rage out of oneself or one's life.. rage:depending on the source of the emotion takes time to work itself out.. I know this emotion pretty good.. inner rage or passion as I prefer.. I direct that energy into my art so that something creative comes out of the feeling.. like you have with this writing.. great job and keep working at it!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on November 25, 2008
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karmic
karmic

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