I still love you?

something i just thought of when someone i had feels for ran through my mind.

I tried to see things through your eyes

so i could stay with you

I tried to stop all my lies

but that's all i knew

 

you cried in my hands

because i made your life so dim

I understand

it's just who i'am

 

I'm putting you at risk

making you go through this

I can't deal this pain

you will never be the same

 

you said you hate me

while you broke free

while you broke me

 

Tears replace you in my hands

but i still understand

why you ran

 

now you are gone and i still love you

but i fear

you don't care

and no matter what i do

I'll never be with you

 

under this mask there is a face

that want's to keep you in this place

but my mind want's you erased

my heart is a closed case

 

your eyes dive into my heart

and stops my breath

ripping me apart

until there's nothing left

 

i don't know what this will do

dont believe you think this is true

but i still love you

Reviews

[Harley (arbiter)]

This is Awesome. All I need to say.

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i like this very much

[Jessica]

i really liked this poem
i found many of the stanzas to be very well written and beautifully crafted
i loved it especially this part

you said you hate me

while you broke free

while you broke me

by reading this poem i can feel the emotion from everyline in every stanza good job!