Wake up

One day I woke up

Thinking every thing will be clear

That you’ll be near

But a mist flew over my eyes

Handicapping me from reality

And fed me lies

An illusion

Leaving all my intentions behind

While this day bled away

One more day lost to cruelty  

And beauty is dead in your eyes

Now like the day I’m lost

But one day I will find life

And my days won’t be filled with such a dreadful mist

While your lips will speak my name

And your eyes will let beauty live in them

That is the day I will really wake up.

 

Reviews

[Avoiry]

This is sad and weary but has a note of hope to it. Waiting for better days. I like the use of the word handicapping , it is not a commonly used word. Good piece, has a working flow to it . Keep it up.

[Jane Doe]

i really liike this its good i think u have a really good talent right here

[thalii]

wow this is really deep

[*** Hey Jude***]

This is such a beautiful expression for the one you care so much for. Be careful , as Im sure you know that love can hurt. Hope you find a recipricale love soon, as I believe everyone deservses to be loved! Very nice piece ~ jude :-)