Yo-Yo

Yo-Yo

A Poem by Kim

all mixed up

confused and lost

but then again

happy and cool

how can it be

one minute up

next second down

laughing then crying

whats going on

to many feelings

running through my head

a yo-yo on a twisted string

© 2008 Kim


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I like how clear you are about this metaphor/analogy - used in the title, and clever human parallels throughout. The figures of speech like 'yo-yo mood' are so common now that I don't know if people think about it much, but your piece makes it clear how accurately applied the phrase is.
Good work.
Thanks for posting it.

p.s.
"to many feelings" [too]
"whats going on" [what's - unless it was deliberate avoidance of punctuation?]


Posted 16 Years Ago



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I like to escape into the world of my mind which then allows the scribblings of reflection to flow. I write what I feel and what comes to mind. Some are silly, some are dark, some are good and som.. more..

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